[wiki] [official] Grammatical and syntax changes to make it sound natural. || jax

From: <hg_AT_suckless.org>
Date: Mon, 3 Nov 2008 09:27:37 +0000 (GMT)

changeset: 179:6a61a5bfdb1e
tag: tip
user: jax_AT_localhost.jaxrcfb
date: Mon Nov 03 02:18:29 2008 -0700
files: wiki.md
description:
Grammatical and syntax changes to make it sound natural.


diff -r 3f0fb850b3b3 -r 6a61a5bfdb1e wiki.md
--- a/wiki.md Mon Nov 03 08:31:49 2008 +0000
+++ b/wiki.md Mon Nov 03 02:18:29 2008 -0700
_AT_@ -7,8 +7,8 @@
 are written using [markdown](http://daringfireball.net/projects/markdown/)
 syntax.
 
-If you like to contribute new content, you can clone the wiki to your local
-host using the following command:
+If you would like to contribute new content, you can clone the wiki to your
+local host using the following command:
 
         hg clone http://www.suckless.org:8000/hg/wiki
 
_AT_@ -22,15 +22,16 @@
 The wiki repository above is world-writable. Your changes will be visible
 at the PREVIEW upstream wiki web site for upcoming changes at
 <http://www.suckless.org:8000/> shortly (*within 5 minutes*). This web site
-contains an additional disclaimer at the bottom that any content is not in our
-responsibility, it is only intended to give you an idea how your changes will
+contains an additional disclaimer at the bottom that any content is not our
+responsibility, and is only intended to give you an idea how your changes will
 look like once they are accepted. The traffic from this URL is throttled to
-*5kb/s* as well, to prevent abusing it for temporary uploads and downloads.
+*5kb/s* as well, to prevent anyone's abusing it for temporary uploads and
+downloads.
 
 Rules
 -----
 * If any abuse happens, we will disable the PREVIEW upstream wiki, keep this
- in mind. We kindly ask you to not destroy the way how we like to collaborate
+ in mind. We kindly ask you to not destroy the way we like to collaborate
   with the community.
 * Please do not add files bigger than *100kb*.
 * Please do not add any binary files except screenshots or images related to our software.
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