Re: [wmii] Request for comments/help

On 4/22/06, Salva Peiró <saoret.one_AT_gmail.com> wrote:
> On 4/21/06, Denis Grelich <denisg_AT_ueberl33t.info> wrote:
> > Have some issues as well, there's a list:
> > all the - should be --- without spaces, or at least --
> > "" should not be used. `` ''
> >
> > 1.3 Wmii [...]
> > not to exceed 10K lines of code
> > small 'k'
> >
> > 2.2 Configuration and Installation
> > and gentoo should already have good
> > 'Gentoo' capitalized
> >
> > 3.2 Focus
> > In X11, exactly one client gets the users input.
> > user's
> >
> > 4.1 First steps
> > the first term is the name of the tag of the window. Then, after the vertical line (the pipe symbol)
> > wmii shows the title of the window.
> > there is no pipe symbol anymore?
> >
> > 4.2 Using Columns
> > columns not capitalized
> >
> > What about adding '?' to the rethorical questions
> >
> > 4.6 How do I close a window
> > Well, first of all every X-Client should have
> > X-client
> >
> > Thus, the Window Manager has to provide
> > window manager
> >
> > 4.7 How do I start programs
> > You may start programs out of a xterm.
> > an xterm
> >
> > 5.3 The glue that puts it all together - 9p
> > is it 9p or 9P? (in the whole paragraph)
> >
> > 5.4 Tools
> > This section gives an little overview of the tools that wmii, but for more detailed explana-
> > tions you should read the man page of each tool, that comes with wmii.
> > something is broken here. (btw: it's "a little overview")
> >
> > 6.2 actions
> > capitalized: Actions
> >
> > 6.4 Changing the looks
> > you might know from html.
> > HTML
> > second is the main colour of bars borders,
> > bar borders
> > 3d-effects
> > 3D
> >
> > 6.5 Filling the status-bar
> > how the bar will be painted(appearance),
> > add a space: painted (appearance)
> > monitoring remaining battery, temperature,\dots
> > add a space: temperature, \dots
> > to save us from typing a lot by issueing
> > issuing
> >
> > Then, in typography, the - is never used. In the most Chapter and section headings you would rather use --- (without spaces between --- and the words left and right). If you really don't like this, at least use --. (Note: in german, there is no ---, only -- is used, but /with/ spaces). Also, " is never used as well. Rather use `` and '' instead.
> >
> > Greetings,
> > Denis
> >
> >
> >
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> >
> >
> >
>
> Denis and Ross,
> Thanks to for the time spent reading the guide, and write down the corrections,
> I've already added most of them. But as neither Steffen or /me are
> native english
> speakers (even we do our best) I prefered to send you the modifications so you
> can check them before pushing.

I don't know if you have accounts on wmii.de. If not, just send us
changes if found. I myself won't have time to correct anything this
weekend, but I'll do my best to proofread everything on monday.

--
mit freundlichen Grüssen
                  Steffen Liebergeld